Pouring a warm soda
over cold ice.
Pops and fizzles
as it melts away.
Tiny rockets of
carbonation
launching out
of the cool glass.
Gently wetting
my hand.
Slow drags
on my cigarette.
Lazy fan blades cooling
light perspiration on
my brow.
All is quiet,
all is calm.
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I love the imagery in this one.
Thank you so much! Ill be paying your blog a visit later on in the day.
Nicely built up picture. Also has a slight sense that something not so good is coming? Like the lull before the storm. Or maybe just my vivd=id imagination!
You are spot on! I wrote that while I was having a hard time sleeping due to being nervous due to spinal surgery I’m having done on the 14th.
Thanks for the lovely comments!
Rockets of carbonation is good. Calming with the fan blades.